I Need A Recommendation For A Good Analysis Thesis Statement I Wrote A Paper Analyzing An Article About

Question

I need a recommendation for a good analysis thesis statement.

I wrote a paper analyzing an article about

why students should consider trade school instead of college.

In the article the author was biased towards trade school and I wanted to highlight in my thesis that the author was pretty effective at using the appeals to logos and pathos when writing the article, specifically when he showed supporting datas for high cost for college and student loans.

Any recommendation for a good thesis statement? I am completely done with my essay, just wanted to see if I get ideas for thesis statement- which I am going to use to incorporate with what I have already and not just copy the answers that I get from here. Thank you!

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